Change... Poem, then Pic!

Brad

Shared on Tue, 03/20/2007 - 19:38

SILENCE

 

 

sometimes I can’t turn it off

and she hates it

because it makes me feel

she needs too much attention

but she says she loves it

when I write

I built my love with

that – but

 

Alone.

I did it all alone

to fulfill the voice

she doesn’t know exists

 

a sound she’ll not

understand

as I cannot comprehend it

either

 

 

- Allen Stewart (Brad)

 

Comments

CofC's picture
Submitted by CofC on Tue, 03/20/2007 - 19:42
I prefer poem, then picture. It seems less a caption that way.
Brad's picture
Submitted by Brad on Tue, 03/20/2007 - 19:54
thanks for the feedback - they really don't go together, but they are all in the same book I put together.
Avril's picture
Submitted by Avril on Tue, 03/20/2007 - 20:21
Beautiful...Is the photograph taken in S.F. Bay??
Brad's picture
Submitted by Brad on Tue, 03/20/2007 - 20:36
the sf side of the bay bridge is shown, can't recall exactly where I was at, but I was probably near transamerica (north side) in a neighborhood.

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