Balance Envisioned

Cynical_Hermit

Shared on Wed, 06/18/2008 - 12:46

So I finished reading Eddings' Belgaraid series again, one of the first fantasy series I actually read, and while looking through the book case for something new I came across this poem I had written tucked away in Wizard's First Rule by Goodkind.  So I just thought I would share it and see what the masses think. 

Every shadow has a source, a beginning,
yet shadows can be banished, chased away
Darkness can never truly be absolute
it is balanced, countered by the light.

The past has brought forth many shadows on my heart
the future, the light of possibilities
battles, struggles and pushes past the shadows
chasing them from memory, tatters to be ignored

Past loves, failures, anger, tragedy
weights all upon the heart and soul
never truly forgotten, a pall upon our vision
yet the future, the light, the love can bring hope

Darkness, pain, memories all quieting, fleeing
the hope of the future, true love blazing
lifting, striving, heart and soul awakening
shaking off the shadows, banishing the tatters

The light has found me, renewed me
love, everlasting, strengthening, binding
raising me above the past, beyond the shadows
a balance wrought, the darkness countered

A better vision sought, of you, and me
joined in light, future dreams beyond shadows
light can never truly be absolute
but balanced, countering, the light can bring peace.

 

On a side note.  I am looking for something new to read so if anyone has some suggestions let me know.  I typically stay in the fantasy realm, but I'm always willing to check out other areas if it can grab my interest.

Comments

VenomRudman's picture
Submitted by VenomRudman on Wed, 06/18/2008 - 22:40
I've really enjoyed everything I've read from Peter F. Hamilton but he's sci-fi. George RR Martin has written some of the best and grittiest fantasy I've ever read. And I love pretty much anything from David Duncan.
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Submitted by Cynical_Hermit on Thu, 06/19/2008 - 11:17
I was reading the game of thrones series, but book 3 took forever to come out I moved on and forgot it. Guess I'll have to go check it out again. Don't think I have read anything from the other two so maybe I shall have some new authors to add to my collection :)
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Submitted by ATC_1982 on Wed, 06/18/2008 - 13:59
Brotherhood of the black dagger
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Submitted by Jennifer on Wed, 06/18/2008 - 14:21
Runelords Series by David Farland if you haven't tried it yet.
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Submitted by Cynical_Hermit on Wed, 06/18/2008 - 14:28
Haven't heard of the Brotherhood..I'll have to check that out. As for the Runelords...I started the first book...and something happened so I never finished it. I do remember it being pretty good so I shall have to find it and start going through it.
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Submitted by ATC_1982 on Wed, 06/18/2008 - 15:31
Just be for warned it is about vampires, but is in the romance section. Still a good read.
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Submitted by Cynical_Hermit on Wed, 06/18/2008 - 17:45
Ah..k gotcha. If you like vampire stuff have you checked out Laurel K Hamilton's Anita Blake series? It's pretty decent. So is E.E. Knight's Vampire Earth.

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